Reviews for Twilight
Freiheit98 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I like the question at the end...it makes you think. I read your profile and you said that you wanted feedback and that you wanted to improve your writing! I think this is really good. It's expressive and the flow is very nice. There is always room for improvement, but I can see very little for this poem! It's really perfect! Just keep writing, it helps you a lot! :D Good job! Keep it up! I'm looking forward to seeing what else you come up with! :D