Reviews for Nice Cold Coke
ThinkPi chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Cute and simple. I'd say this is the poetic equivalent to a refreshment, it's fresh and not complicated to "ingest" haha. I'd like to point out you probably meant to use "sore." That's the only error I really see without getting super anal. Great work, can't wait to see more and see you progress as a poet.
inkfngrz chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
All you forgot was the 'Ahhhhhhh!'
I take it back, you've got the feelings just right. It didn't need the "Ahhhhhhhh."
Write on!
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
This is cute. Its short, but it's to the point. I guess we all have our vices, but mine is a ice cold Sprite. Also the chugging part is so like me. :)