|Reviews for What Lies On The Shelf|
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Well my guess would be a book. ;) Anyway, on with my review. As soon as I read the very first line, my mind flew to my bookshelf where many a book has a crinkled spine but I love that touch under my fingertips because it makes me think to all the times I've read it and how much I've enjoyed reading it. This is a great piece about books because it gives a new perspective of the poem but with such raw emotion - almost like the book cares more about pleasing it's owner than the owner does about the book; especially if the owner screams and 'twists my ears' which I think is dog ear-ing. And to dog-ear your book is horrible, I mean we have bookmarks for that! XD Anyway before I ramble any further - I must say that this is another superb piece and a further testament to you as a fantastic writer. Awesome! :D
| Tekiri chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
... is it a book? "Twist my ears." Is like dog-ear-ing a page...
"And I have satisfied
Your ever thirsty mind."
"I and I shall arouse the fires
Of your soul
In the torch lit light
Of the dark."
I love this poem, though. it is very well-written. :) One of my favorites of yours