|Reviews for Home|
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
This is both sad and incredibly beautiful at the same time. I like the fixed structure of 3 lines in each stanza (up until the end) and the emotion and imagery in this. A part of me thinks there is some honesty in this piece, that we write about our feelings as if it is going to release the hurt we feel; and also how we make everything seem 'beautiful' when in reality it's not as beautiful as we make it seem. I know I may be repeating myself but this is very well phrased and beautifully put. This just cements my belief in you as a phenomenal writer. An Absolute Brilliant PIece!
| True Talker chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Reading this makes me think that some of the words in this are quite sweet and I like them. It also makes me think that to me anyone who writes things that touch my heart is NOT rotten to the core. SERIOUSLY.