Reviews for Nightmares
Horror lover chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
This is one of the BEST horror stories I have ever read. Keep up the good-no, BRILLIANT-work.
moonlightstay chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
i think you should continue it with the doctor making her be that way and stuff and up to you, i really liked it, amazing job!
Miggles chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Loved it - really original and imaginative. I love the way you describe things too. :)
However, I spotted a few mistakes;
'the pain was real, unimaginable and maddening pain' - you say 'pain' twice
'from lack I sleep' - from lack of sleep
'Without a word I grabbed two

Monsters from the fridge' - I don't think you meant to have the new paragraph here
'why felt like' - what felt like
'"She attacked us." Mr. Stevenson finally said, after

an eternity of silence.' - again, I don't think you meant for that paragraph to be there, but you need one at the start of '"She attacked us."' because the speaker has changed
'The Stevenson's' - no need for the apostrophe, as it is a plural, not a posessive
Straightjackets are no longer used in psychiatric hospitals, but other kinds of restraints are. I don't think it really matters in a story to be honest, but it's up to you how realistic you want it to be. :)
Otherwise, really, really good, if a bit gruesome. :P
Update soon! :D