Reviews for A distubing vision
QuantumRelativity chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant: Something I always enjoy about your work is that I can find myself in the exact setting. Your imagery is simply amazing. You start is off nicely, making the reader interested in what this character's dream is, making them curious.
You start the dream, and I feel like I am there. I am in suspense throughout, anticipating what will happen next. And that twist at the end! Genius! I have probably already told you that I wonder where you come up with these amazing ideas. You are really talented, and this, like your other pieces, was amazing! Great work as always!
Luna's Child chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Wow, I certainly did not expect the ending! Now I'm curious as to what these dreams really suggest: the coming of evil? Guess I won't find out until you decide to update it :P.

Just one minor grammatical error: "The person asking this in question is a young man," The word "in" shouldn't be there.

Otherwise than that, I didn't see any other error. Nice story!
echoofemptiness chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Well written, I enjoyed it. Good imagery.