|Reviews for The End|
| NoitsSlenderman chapter 17 . 7/17/2013
Miss me bitch?
| Hunter teddy chapter 17 . 6/29/2013
I have really enjoyed this story so far. I started reading this today, and 4 hours later here i am. This story is written in a very unique way and it is easy to follow. Thank you for also clearly stating who's POV the story is in at any given time. I have no complaints, but i do think i would enjoy longer chapters. Thank you for posting an amazing story, and for being yourself.
| FunPerson8987 chapter 16 . 6/23/2013
:O This chapter makes it all twist. I'm scared to think of what will happen to Athena :(
| FunPerson8987 chapter 15 . 6/15/2013
Thanks for the shout-out! Love this story! Makes me really inspired. :)
| FunPerson8987 chapter 14 . 6/1/2013
Yay! I love this series! I'm so worried about Athena in the future!
| BowSilent chapter 7 . 3/31/2013
I LOVE this idea, your use of italics in particular really ties the text together. I've really enjoyed what you've written so far, you have very few grammatical errors and are able to proficiently build suspense and intrigue in the reader. The plot is intense and complex, but this is something you pull off well. I can't wait for you to update. :)
| NoitsSlenderman chapter 6 . 3/29/2013
i cant review this one... because its too awesome not to talk about in person!
| NoitsSlenderman chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
this one was really good too. loved the different POVs.
| NoitsSlenderman chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
is this the one that bitch commented about? lets try to see THEM write anything this AWESOME!
| NoitsSlenderman chapter 3 . 3/29/2013
you told me about this one. even better than you made it sound!
| NoitsSlenderman chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
your chapters are getting better, if possible. however, you might get a little trouble for putting the song in there, as i checked and its copyrighted. really, REALLY good though.
| NoitsSlenderman chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
really good. very ominous. thanks for the dedication, and don't ask for help, its inevitable. (bwahahaha!)
| FishCakeIce chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
instead of telling us that she's having a dream, try just going into the dream and then she "suddenly wakes up" or something that makes us realize it was just a dream. this was an amazing chapter and I can't wait to read more!
| FishCakeIce chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
I feel like Michael would stay up and watch them because he doesn't trust them. xD BTW, ARE ATHEN AND MICHAEL WIZARDS? (/WITCHES?) (Harry Potter)
| FishCakeIce chapter 3 . 3/29/2013
yeah keep going! you got this and this is really cool! she's so badass