Reviews for The Day My Name caused WW3
Kommissar chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
[Always expect the unexpected, that's what people say anyway. Why am I being told this? You may be asking. You'll find out, as it all starts on a Tuesday morning…]

This is a bit like stating the obvious, or telling as opposed to showing. I mean, by default, there should be an explanation if one keeps reading.

[Corey declared]

Dialogue tags usually weaken the dialogue. It's best to use 'said' in most cases.

Why are the kids bickering loudly in class without the teacher reprimanding them? The whole prologue feels a bit like filler. Nothing happens, just kids goofing around and acting silly. There's no real character development either. Remember to show, don't tell.
3yellowmice chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
Awesome! Congrats on passing the fifteen thousand mark my dear :)
The action in this chapter means it's finally fitting its definition as a thriller. My compliments to the author(s).
Tee, hee.