Reviews for Second First Chance
BrandNew chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Wonderful job! Wow I hope I meet a Jimmy one day ahaha. He was so quick to forgive her, which is how I think God wants all of his children to be. Wonderful job! I can only imagine what Erin's going through as well. I mean your first time is a pretty big deal and people always say that when it's your first time you become emotionally attached to the person. You should add more to this! :D
Ciao Niccie chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Bravo friend, I love the moral lesson of the story too ;) very cute
Abby0512 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Another great story. Again, I found it sweet. Then again, I find most of your stories sweet.

Abby0512
Clarissa Cloud chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
this is a beautiful story, I love the complexity but also the simplicity of the entire thing. I always enjoy the combination of them. Wonderful job, keep the imagination flowing!
Nouveaux chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Realistic and sweet. I guess the biggest trouble was that there was a lack of emotion in the story, and probably because of it feeling quite rushed. I suppose you wanted it to be a oneshot so it had to be like that. I like the ending though :)