Reviews for Corruption
Mandy Tyler chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
You noted in the intro that this was based on true events, which makes it truly horrific, in the cold and aloof treament Adelina receives just for daring to go somplace that was apparently a set up in the first place. You described her loneliness and confusion elegently in the first chapters then her confusion and anxiety after she was taken.

As I mentioned, this is a true horror story. No Vampire, Werewolf, Zombie, or any other kind of creature or monster can ever compare to the monsters unleashed inside humans when given a hint of power over people. What makes this so scary is that it can happen to anyone of us at anytime. Great writing!