Reviews for Tears
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Hm, this reminds me of when you're upset and you managed to hold back the tears until someone asks you if you're okay and you just burst into tears and you can't answer because you're crying too much. That's exactly the picture I get in my head when I read this. A nice haiku here, even though it is sad.
thegirlwhocouldfly chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
I wonder what the speaker is going through here. Is she being interrogated? Maybe she can't find the correct words to answer the questions. Perhaps if she answers, she will end up hurting the person asking. That's what I love about poetry. The writer just leaves enough words for the reader to keep wondering.
I love reading your haikus. Keep it up :)
True Talker chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
It makes me wonder - What questions are asked of you? Or to you?
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Your hauikis (not sure of spelling) are always brilliant. You manage to capture so much into the few words you use. Another great piece.