Reviews for Smile
The True Dreamer chapter 5 . 3/30/2013
Poor Markus! His poor boring life is being horribly interrupted! LOL! Marshall completes Markus in a sence. They're personalities complete each others some how. Its pretty funny watching there relationship slowly progress. Nice job!
The True Dreamer chapter 3 . 3/30/2013
Hello! Your story is very interesting so far! That part where Markus wanted to beat him with his own smile was purely awesome! I would have not tried to be friend with him after that. But I have a feeling that things in Markus's repetitive life are about to get a lot more lively!

Now for the CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. As you already pointed out yourself, you have many spelling errors...but who doesn't. Also, this is my opinion, but i really like the length of your chapters..People sometimes think that 7,000-8000 word chapters are good, but for me, I start to lose interest. Your chapters are straight to the point.
Other than that, that's it. Great job!
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