Reviews for One Hour After Midnight
tolerate chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
God, this is beautiful. The words: "in this moment when the moon has fallen" gave me a rather heartbreaking imagery and the whole poem was calm, like ocean waves, and if it had a color, it'd be the moonlight blue. Despite the melancholic mood, the last three lines give a certain hope for tomorrow. All in all, it's wonderfully written.
Wondering Jew chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
I enjoy...why do I have a feeling I know what this is about?
WriterElsewhere chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I really enjoyed the descriptions of the closeness, and the intimacy of both individuals in this poem.

"Inverting the night's heavy spell of slumber, a dream distilled." was my favorite line. I think the most intimate moments we share with our significant others is during those late hours. No words are necessary.

The imagery is well depicted; though, not too descriptive in the sense that everything is there in the reader's mind. It leaves a lot of room to imagine everything.

Well done!