Reviews for Trapped
if.only-if.only chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
I think this is my favourite of your poems.
The Loved And Unloved chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Hi! Sorry I did't review this faster, I just haven't had time.

I love the emotion of it. It's very relate-able to a lot of teens(:

-Amber

- The Loved And Unloved
jesusfreakauthorgirl17 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Poetically, this poem is amazing! Again, your use of rhyme astounds me!
As for the content: you don't have to live in your shame and regret. Everyone has things that they wish they haven't done. But Someone made it so we don't have to live in it. He gives us a better life. Ask me about Him if you want. It could very well change your life for the better.
Gingerembre chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
This is brillant! I love the metaphors, I especially love the first two lines! Keep Writing :)