Reviews for Too Busy
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
I love the rhyme scheme and flow-stop rhythm which helps carry the narrative of that poor girl. I like this poem because it's raising awareness on poverty which is sometimes overlooked as an issue. The imagery is very vivid and I could almost picture it. But what makes this poem particularly great is that rhetorical question at the end. It seems so mocking and almost like an accusation flung at the reader as it asks them not to ignore the problem but to notice it and to do something about it. Very well done - great piece. :)
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Fantastic. The stanza length and rhyme scheme hold a flow-stop rhythm that is perfect for the sentiments expressed. Easy to love.
True Talker chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
When I read this, it makes me think. What does it make me think? If a person HONESTLY needs me then I am there for them. SERIOUSLY. This is what I REALLY think when I read this. REALLY.