Reviews for Social Predators
Rosezelene Ersa chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
the first sentence alone makes me think of that tv show, Monk. the rest fits in to how so many of us feel but often cant put into words. your talent is very amazing, the way you can write about things that are seemingly diffrent, yet potray them in a way that makes your audiance go," oohh. ahhhh."
best regards,
Rosezelene Ersa
Faye HBH chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
That's awesome :D I feel like I don't belong in Society either!
Miggles chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Interesting idea, and I really liked this. I think you use too many dashes however, and we already know that it's about people not animals, so you don't need to make that point again in the actual text. I would refrain from pointing this out again until the very end, to make it more subtle and sophisticated.
My favourite part, however, is the way you describe the different types of people as animals; owls, monkeys, wolves, birds - brilliant! :D