Absolutely wonderful! Not only sexy as eff, but also funny, cute and incredibly well written!

I adore this story. Fave!

Just... wow. Hot and steamy, but sweet and lovely. And at the same time I have a bit of a thing for tattoos and piercings. Well, more than a bit.

I'm heading to read more of your stuff now...

THIS IS AMAZINGGG. WHEN THERES ROMANCE INVOLVING THIS . I CANT EVEN .ASDGKHFJDGSJFKSJCBEHCDBEHJC I LOVE YOUR STORY! THERES PARTS RIGHT? I SHALL READ MORE OF YOUR STORIESSSS

I'd really love a sequel - this is really good thanks!

I am loving this fic as well, and LASO look forward to a SEQUEL pleaasssseeee! :D Also, I cried inside, at how short the fic felt, even for a oneshot. PLease see if you can turn this into a series, the wait for a sequal or series update is antagonizing~~ 3 #

this is hilarious lol, how he did the piercing when Rachel was sufficiently 'distracted' and her asking 'is this standard procedure?' XD l look forward to reading more of your writing - but you closed the poll on your profile already?

WRITE A SEQUEL PLEASE

This was wonderfully written. I especially liked Nick's character. This definitely deserves a sequel.

Totally wish you would extend on this! Hopefully you'll consider?

I have to admit that I don't like this one as much as Part 4 (Miranda Warnings). Don't misunderstand me! This one is good and hot and amazing but the story, and especially the pierced-clit-thing, well, disgusted me somehow... while reading it, I hoped she wouldn't let her clit pierced, haha.

I'm glad I didn't read this story as the first one, otherwise I wouldn't have read the others :
But I like your writing, so keep it up!

AH? I want to read more about this couple! :)

OMG! I loved this! So hot!

Totally loved this and this totally deserves a sequel!

Amazing!

Please write a sequel! This story is far too amazing to not continue! And that cliffhanger! I think you're trying to kill me...in the good way, wait, there's no good way...Well, I hope you get what I meant. Sorry about my awkwardness.