Reviews for Unprofessionals, Pt 1: The Piercing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omfg I squealed when I read this... HOW DO YOU WRITE SO GOOD? Can I have your skills, please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sequel please! |
![]() ![]() your story is great it made me thingle oh well fan of your work read you on fanfiction and now here hope you continue to write |
![]() ![]() God DAMN I think I could read this a million times! XD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SEQUEL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW, I am thoroughly impressed in your ability to write a oneshot that issweet and romantic but very sexy and smoldering at the same time. I love the characters and wouldn't complain AT ALL if you came out with a sequel ;) Fantastic job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was wonderful. The characters seemed realistic and likable. I'm curious though about when he did pierce her though? Was it when he was fingering her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() What did Matty and Amy do while waiting, hmm? ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A sequel for this one definitely. I think they'd make a cute but hot couple. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A sequel would be good. Yep, it would be really good. And I'm not just saying that because you can write a decent m rated scene. i like your characters. they have a good amount of depth for such a short word count |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooooo HAWWT! Do another! |
![]() ![]() Super hot! Sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Write a sequel to this please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please write sequels 2 both pf ur stories in this series i loved them both |