| Reviews for Unprofessionals, Pt 1: The Piercing |
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   Fair to Midland my children chapter 1 . 4/4/2013 One word... Sexy... |
| blackthorne-hunt chapter 1 . 4/4/2013 That was so fucking hot! Please write a sequel! Please! Please! Please! |
| RachxNick chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 WRITE A SEQUEL |
| HedwigsAngel chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 That was perfect. MAKE A SEQUEL I BEG YOU! |
| DollyMarie chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 Please write more to this. I loved it! |
| starchild8790 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 yes a sequel would be awesome. |
| Dill Wilson chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 I would like to congratulate you for being willing to write about such a daring situation. The story is real, honest, funny, and out of the box (no pun intended) - courageous for a writer. Having said all that, I'm sure there are some professional piercing artists out there who would take offense or umbridge to letting Nick do what he did. The story might be a little more believeable (or acceptable) if she had a previous relationship/friendship with him (maybe he talks her into it as a friend) so that what happens between them is more reasonable and less professionally problematic. That's just my sense - but I always like seeing writers taking risks and you certainly did here - so good job. |
| fedoralover101 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 DO A SEQUEL DO A SEQUEL I'M BEGGING YOU! |
| Britt chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 Omg sequel! i loooved it! |
| RieH chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 I loved it! Great story that flows of the screen and makes your reader laugh. I'm hoping for that sequel :-) |
| smrae chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 Great story! Would love a sequel your characters seemed like a lot of fun to write. |