Reviews for Beauty
Jess chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Beautiful and captured her perfectly. Great write David. But I have to say.. I'm worried about her. She's hearing voices again. And I think she needs help in getting rid of them.
Elizabeth Clayton chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
beautiful poem
Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
This is a pretty poem! it makes me want to believe this poem is describing someone you know that exist and she is beautiful in your eyes :). I feel like the poem scratched the surface of my curiosity and looks pretty on paper but lacks depth ( more images to project in my mind to see this person exist or bring it to live) nevertheless very good poem :D
thoseforgottenwords chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Wonderful poem, I enjoyed it. The metaphor in the last line really drew the piece together. :)
j3johnsonj chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
loved it