Reviews for Christ is Coming
nothingtralala chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Oooh, this is great! :D
Isolde Auckley chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
I really like this poem! It speaks so wonderfully of the Savior and how there is such cause for rejoicing. I am also pleased to see that you have chosen your words carefully, employing rhythm and rhyme in this poem. It does not really matter how long the poem is, it is the heart that counts!
ArielofNarnia chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Nice. :-) I'd say something about more balance in the lines (if not meter) but since those are my weaknesses, I won't. :-)
so silver bright chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
I can feel the faith in the emotion here :) good job! keep writing! :D