Reviews for Logic
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Another nice haiku here, and I particularly like the emphasis on "frayed" and "SNAP" - almost like you give it more power by making it stand out from the rest. I also like the implication that people are the "rope" and that they can still manage if worn down ("frayed") but one day they'll be pushed to their limit and they'll "SNAP". But that's just my interpretation of the piece so I could be wrong. Great haiku here.
True Talker chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Reading this makes me think. It also makes me want to share that when I care about a person I wish to be the one that encourages good things in them as that is what that person has done for me too. REALLY. I just wanted to share this, as I felt the NEED to. SERIOUSLY.
LafayetteX chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
I like how you gave the word more life by bolding and italicizing them ;) Good Job
tolerate chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
I liked the rhyme between 'understand' and 'snap. It's a nice Haiku.