Reviews for The Black Heart
littlepinkvoice chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
It is a bit to much dialog in the beginning but I powered through! I liked
Mary's personality and you should write a bit more in her perspective.
I am writing some storys and you should definelty check them out!
Please write more chapters ;)
Mr Theory chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
dumb
Watercatcher7984 chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Good plot line, but I think it could've been executed better.