Reviews for Claudia
inevitablePain chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
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So...I see potential. There's not a lot to say at this point; I like how you're giving us a sense of character personality in such a small introduction though. I love how you kept the thing with Claudia at the start sort of secret and mysterious, giving away only a few small hints as to who and what she is. However, I think, although you are very descriptive, you might want to spend a little more time on character interaction. I caught some punctuation mistakes too, but nothing too major, so don't worry your head off about them XD

Well, that's all for now. Sayonara.
-Pain