|Reviews for The Silence in Between|
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/27/2013
I love all of the allusions to Oscar Wilde and Dorian Grey, your writing style is wonderful as well :)
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
I really enjoyed the descriptive word choices and usages that you used here. In particular I liked how vivid the section where her tears melted into the lake. I really got a clear visual from that and the detail was striking. Things like that stay with you.
My only real source of critique for this chapter is merely that I found it to be a little short. By the end I was over involved with the moment but the end so suddenly came as a bit of a shock. Although I get that its a "dream" (very cool closing BTW) I still felt like you could have added more substance and action, maybe even some back story as to why she is so sad. Its a dream world, so you can literally do anything you want to. Keep up the good work.