Reviews for How to Survive an Apoplectic Mating |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AND YET SHE ALREADY KNOWS ABOUT WEREWOLVES. HOHOHO. What a turnout. Wait, Josef's father is fat? :o Or is that just Mari's insult? Cause I thought he was supposedly well built since he's an alpha. The spankinggg. I never thought an asian woman would behave like this, but then again, she wasn't born with her heritage much... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Great that you updated! I can see why Josef didn't do anything to Mari.. but know her better. If they only knew how she lived in.. xD Ohsnap. What will she do now? I find it funny how Josef's dad just watched Mari do whatever... loool. To clean up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Asian girls are actually not as petite as you think. o3o I've seen enough to say so (since 85% - 90% of my school was originally filled with asian kids, but now it's like 70% xD). Can't wait to see her reaction of the father... hrm... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loveeee this story! it's so funny & i love the whole scandalous father son's classmate thing :D update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find this story so unbelievably humourous. While some parts are far fetched, I still enjoy the lightheartedness of the story, and the fact that I'm so into werewolf stories at the moment is a bonus. I would like to know more about the pack's customs, especially in relation to the town that they're residing in. Also, usually from the other stories I've read, the alpha secures a high paying job in order to support his family (extended included), and also as a safety measure to make sure that no one discovers their secret. I was taken aback that the alpha was a butcher, and the fact that he didn't learn English at all. I mean, in order to protect the pack, he's supposed to be on top of everything, is he not? If he's trying to blend into society, then the force of his power alone can't get him out of a sticky situation. Still, it's interesting enough to keep me reading. Also, Mari is way over the top. Especially with her crush on Josef. Does she not realize how completely creepy she is? I would like to know exactly why she reacts the way she does towards her crushes. Like she's embarrassed of her behaviour, but she can't stop. I don't understand. Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is going to be awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read the oneshot and I think it would be cool to see it continied. I dont know how it would fit in with this story though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! Please continue. |
![]() ![]() Yay! A new chapter! Looks like they are in trouble now! Update Please! |
![]() ![]() I think it would be interesting if you did a little interlude (I don't know if thats the right word?) from the alpha's point of view beginning when Mari fell sleep from crying. |
![]() ![]() I don't think you should mix those two stories. They are just too different in regards to the relations to the main characters. Anyways, such an enjoyable and crazy chapter. The texting thing cracked me up, doesn't Mariko have a lock on her phone? I'm glad her friends came to their senses and stopped ignoring her. It would cool to show a flashback of their childhood together, I'm really digging their sisterhood. Well update this awesome story soon! |
![]() ![]() Love this story |
![]() ![]() I also don't think you should combine this with "oriental mate". However I would love a continuation of that one-shot! |
![]() ![]() Errr, well if you intwined this with oriental mate. Mari would be royalty (from the viewpoint that William and the princess are her parents.) and her becoming royalty would be so weird. IMO, it would be like god modding mari. |
![]() ![]() No. Please don't tie the oneshot and this piece together. T_T |