Oh and about tying in the oneshoot "My Oriental Mate," to this story, I don't think it would be the best idea at this point in the story. This story world is just coming together, I think its a great idea, since you've carried it out well in the past with "Atropa Belladonna" and "My Wolf Boy" but its way too early in this fiction to try.

I love Mariko's childish personality, it's innocence never gets old. Somethings been bothering me though, why is Sevastyan need Mariko as is mate? What's the importance of a mate once you've produced an heir and already mated as a werewolf? I mean it's not like he'll expect her to give him a kid or anything. Is it just a need to find your one true soulmate? I'm just curious how the laws work in this story. Hope the sisterhood doesn't get into too much trouble! Hope you have time in the near future to update.

I don't think you should mix in My Oriental Mate. They seem pretty different.

Good chapter btw :) I love Mariko's personality LOL.

-K

I don't think it should be a continuation of "My Oriental Mate" because the setup of it all doesn't match, besides I think that story could be continued as a different story. But I enjoy both of them

Great story! I am really enjoying it, and cannot wait for more updates. I will have to go read some of your other stories in the mean time! Keep up the great work! :)

Took me a minute to realize that you weren't referring to Lorena and Mariko having actual puppies lol. Fun Chpater, but I more of the Alpha! PLEASE update soon!

CURSE YOU AND YOUR CLIFF HANGERS! GAh! Why is this story so addicting? I hope Addison and Gary don't get into too much trouble, but it's not like they are going to hurt Mariko or anything since she's the Alpha's mate. Personally I think the three of them could take Josef on. Please update soon!

Why is he getting his panties in a bunch? It's not like Mariko isn't going to find out about werewolves eventually being his father's mate and all. Anyways since Mariko got away, is Sevastyan going to come after her? I hope the you are able to get around your other work to update this one soon, I'm always left wanting more each chapter. For the "Oriental Mate" thing, I would leave it be, I mean I like the connection. But it doesn't feel like that and this story will mesh well.

UH OH! Trouble, trouble...

Crap, is Josef going to snitch on them. Poor Mariko, being ignored by her friends, I'm glad they came to their senses. And is Lorena apart of a different wolf pack? Since it seems that she can smell like the other werewolves, but Sevastyan's pack is Russian, so I wouldn't think that she would be apart of it. I like the idea of eventually making this a tie in to "My Oriental Mate," but I think it would would be to confusing to do so this early on in the story. Overall I think that this story can stand on its own, but if you decide to make a connection between the two stories, I won't complain. Oh and just to confirm, Werewolves can't turn humans right? I hope you have time to update this in the future!

More pleeeeeeaaaaaaassssssse! I've been stalking your page like a jealous boyfriend, and I'm about to DIE!

Love your stories! :-{D
Update soon...or I will pleasantly kidnap you...and possibly give you ice cream with a cherry on top.

Great chapter. I personally would like this to be a separate story than An Oriental Mate.

Woaww loved the Chapter very much.. It's Great.. Just loved it.. Eagerly waiting for the next Chapter to see what will happen.. Please Update Soon dear... :)

First, I do not think I am interested in intertwining this story with the one shot, I am not sure how it would either affect or benefit the story. And second, I love this story! Actually I say that about almost all your stories... but it is non the less true. I have been stalking your fictionpress page for an update! Mostly because I'm too lazy to log in and actually add it to the alert. But anyway, I really enjoyed how you covered the consequences without making a whole chapter about it. Mariko is just hilarious, in many ways she is such a child.

Happy Writings!

:D