Reviews for Slayer Traits First Year
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
Good story line... But writing style needs improving, feels very child like. Keep gong at it though
Cindy chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Wo0o0w ! Great start right through to the end of Chapter one* ! Super stoked & can't wait to read the next chapter* ! :D

GREAT going Kera* !

Really happy for you ! :)

xXx*..
J.Smith chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Sounds good but sounds a lot like vampire diary's just a bit twisted sorry for my comments on your piece
But I really would like to see more because this is just the first chapter of your "book" right so if its as good as it sounds so fare would love to see the finished book
So finish it and post it so we could read the next big vladimir's
Felrain chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
So far it is VERY interesting. It's not often that I find supernatural novels that involve the undead vampires (that are good mind you). I myself didn't spot any errors but I'm not very good at spotting my own so there may be a few I didn't notice.
It was a perfect beginning chapter!
Kat chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
So, I don't think there's anything I need to address that I didn't address in the email I sent you. The dialog is great, character interaction is good and I like where this story is going. Just be careful of all the unnecessary action you put in, watch your tense and leave some things to the readers imagination. Also, never show all your cards until you need to! Even if it is only for a secondary character.
Dylan Petzer chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
One of the best pieces I have ever read! Put me down for the whole series once its published!u go girl!
nataliamuller28 chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
I LOVED IT. Storyline is great had to force myself to put it down and bath my son. Kera great job sweetie. Can't wait for the rest :0)
Carey-Anne chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Beautifully written. Love it, love it, love it. Please write more Kera! :)
RJcity chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
I like it a lot! Keep going ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
I have read this chapter over and over and it gets better everytime, I think it is great, and I will read the whole book oneday a million times XD
LOVE IT!
wenyigo chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Hi

I really like your story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. You are an amazing writer! Also, I can't wait to read the next chapter of Vampire Knight Innocence D. Please update soon, I love your stories. )

I can't wait to see your book published, I already know at least 3 people who will be interested.

wenyigo (from fanfiction)