Reviews for Randomness
Krazykriss chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Well, it was random. Lol. Kool story! ;)
xRandomGirlx chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
O-oh my god... Madi! You one crazy chica! Everyone on here probably things you're lesbian now xD
tamarkaph2013 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
I am not sure of the imagery of "pony-tail trailing behind her." How long is this pony tail? And truthfully if you'd be interested in improving your writing skills, look up on line "passive voice." And learn how to not use it. Then, you'll be on your way as a writer.