Reviews for The Tears of an Angel
tamarkaph2013 chapter 2 . 4/10/2013
He slapped me? But you felt no pain? Can you show more feeling in this or are there no feelings because you are dead? ... would you mind reviewing something of mine in return?
xXxBlackSymphonyxXx chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
Yeah! All that drama and crap! What will happen to Kimmy? If Daniel actually loved her, why did he say that?
Muhahahaha!
tamarkaph2013 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Nicely written. I only found one grammar glitch... "Mercy, your not dead! Please say you're not dead!"
Your should be you're. And don't mind me, I'm like a grammar queen. I just spent 2.5 years meeting with a critique group for a novel-length story I wrote. I will follow your story. I'm fairly to this site and I prefer to read short stuff so don't take it personally if there end up being a lot of chapters and I don't read all of it.