Reviews for The Diamond Raven
Dougie Zerts chapter 1 . 7/22/2020
Great opening! I want to read more of it!
JD Kennedy chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
This is good, the narrative reminded me of the prologue chapter to Stephen Kings 'Needful Things'
Keep it up :)
Patrick Gillespie chapter 2 . 3/18/2004
I really liked the intro to this story, it really draws you in. Plus it allows for all sorts of interesting stories to be told. Though like some of the other reviewers, I wouldn't have stopped Clarkson's Story where you did, it's too short. But keep going, this is good.
RiversRage chapter 2 . 2/12/2004
First of all the cussing doesn't help the story at all, you need to expand, your being to brief, and the two chapters you have should be chapter one, they're too short to be two chapters.
Gothic Renegade chapter 2 . 1/7/2004
Cool. SOunds really good Continue please
horse-whisperer chapter 2 . 7/18/2003
well, it's pretty interesting, like queenie said, it's eerie and haunting, but I wouldn't have ended the 2nd Chapter where you ended it. keep writing, though, i will be checking back.
Queenie -Too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 6/22/2001
This is getting better, I love the first part of your story, it was so, so, haunting, and eerie. Please write some more.