Reviews for Longing
Doctor Alexander chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
Wow... this both really sweet and unfortunately common . I love your writing style... it's cool how your ABAB rhyme patterns changes into that neat half-rhyme at the end. Awesome job!
TheSageofThyme chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
This is really sweet, and I love the style of writing... Just not sure how to describe why. But like I said, this is really sweet with that sadness that is hard to describe... You captured it perfectly.