Great story, love the powers and how you describe what its like to BE an elemental. My only negative would be the ending, your missing any sort of climax. Every things over and done with and well resolved long before the book ends

Great Epilogue! Attan is what they decided to name their child, huh? It's a good name.
Are you going to write a story on Attan as well?

This is such an amazing story! : )

In answer to Aquade's question: Let's see . . . Merrell will no doubt be pleased. He thought of Aylard as a liability. The news will probably speculate on Aylard's absence, but since no one saw what happened, that's all it will ever be-speculation. Although I'm sure the theory that he finally 'released' will be tossed about. Ironic, that it ended up being the truth. Jet would have shared the news with the Elementals who regularly merged with him and Doll. Among them, probably Macek will be shocked. The rest, Family after all, will take the news with their usual stoicism which passes for lack of real emotion. Aylard was an unknown factor, at first a threat, then a key to their mysterious past, and at the end, a puzzle. Only Jet will truly miss Aylard. For all their differences, he was the closest thing in existence to what Jet is. But life goes on. And elementals never truly die.

Aylard has chosen to led himself go forever?! I kinda liked him!

How will the Sons of Men, Family, and non-family take to this news?

Doll is pregnant? I wonder what the others will think of this...

Excellent ! Like the action!

Yes! Merrel can now do it! I kinda felt sorry for him when he was left out of the group. Will Jet and the others somehow manage to find a way to save the Sons of Men in the cave? Although to tell you the truth, I think they sorta deserved it if they get buried by the rocks and stuff.

That last part made me laugh. Merrell really needs to learn how to do that. Everybody else except him can.

Looks like some aren't taking Jet's kingship easily. I hope, with the help of his friends, Merrell, and possibly Aylard, he will be able to calm everyone down, and help them work together. Or at least not try to cut each other's throat out...

Aww. Sweet. It's sad that then former king 'left.' But I'm glad that everybody, more or less, seems to accept Jet as King.

Is the story going to end?

This is very well-written. *places bookmark* I look forward to reading more.

Amazing. I couldn't stop reading your story! (And now I just finished the latest chapter.)
I love your plots, your characters, your imagination,... I really love your story!

Can't wait fot the next part. I can't stand Aylard, truly. That man is a selfish bastard.

Nice! Sorry it took me so long to review. I'm still reading!