Reviews for This Poem
TaintedXDesires chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I like it, it's creative, which I suppose is the point. That sounded stupid, but yeah, it's good and I like it.
so silver bright chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
This kind of struck me... my older brother was very close to shipping out to boot camp in San Diego for joining up with the marines (but he got fed up with the whole process and his ship date changing so often and not getting anywhere with his staff sergeant's bosses)... but you probably didn't need to know that :P oh well, excuse that bit of randomness

but it DID kind of catch my attention. I mean it was just... wow.

To shut up and end this randomness-ensnared review, I will say this: I really really liked this and hope you keep writing!