God I hate smith

Damn they got Olivier. Elena is very slippery, no one can hold onto her for very long. I think Hayden and everyone will be pissed that she was taken again for like the millionth time, right under their noses too.

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Poor WadeT_T and I used to hare him too. Doesn't Olivier or rather Elizabeth feel anything for Wood, shouldn't she take on Olivier's feelings, if she does I hope her and Smith get into a fight. And I hope she kills Smith and Issac too. Okay well that doesnt make sense, Smith is already bonded so she can go, but Olivier and Phinn are still in danger. Elizabeth has been pretty chill, maybe she'll be the one to accidently betray Issac and Smith, I hope Smith goes out brutal and Issac too. I wonder who's coming? Everyone maybe lol that scene with Phinn just hurt, hes been out of the picture for so long. I really hope Elena can do that hotspot thing soon and NOT get caught. Maybe she can threaten her own safety to put Issac in his place. I just wish she could do something, she wishes she could do something. Anyways thank you for two wonderful chapters!

I wish she had powers

Elena is wonderful and brave, I'm glad she stuck to her guns there. Can't wait for your next update!

OH MY GOODNESS I LOVE JASPER NOW! POOR THING I WAS SO GLAD WHEN HE FINALLY OPENED UP TO ELENA AND WE GOT TO SEE I TO HIS PAST. AND ISSAC IS SCUM, THE STUFF I WIPE OFF MY SHOES. ELENA IS HIS ONLY WEAKNESS, SHE SHOULD USE IT TO HER ADVANTAGE, MAYBE EVEN PLAY SMITH AND ISSAC AGAINST EACH OTHER, AND NOW WE'LL GET TO SEE WOOD SOON!

And now she just needs to somehow get them out of there. Talk about bum luck, love the updates as always :) any wait for the next ones!

Knew it. I knew Olivia wasn't Olivia, she was acting really weird. We haven't heard from Elena's feelings in a while, at least not as obviously as this.

Um, what else to say, love the story, and have all my fingers and toes crossed for a happy ending.

Am super tired I can't seem to think or write properly... :/

Huh Elena elana smh. They cant even blame her this time, cause Hayden and winter flecked Olivier out and they're trained soldiers, plus they must have schooled whoever is in Olivier on what to say and how to act. I hope Hayden and winter are able to save her, but the next thing York asked her was if she liked Phinn with short hair, so I'm going to assume that she'll be seeing him soon. Of course I could be wrong, hopefully. At least now we know that jasper is safe from binding, but now Olivier is in danger, hopefully since she's in the kingdom, winter can intervene her escape and expel her. Thank you for another wonderful chapter!

Okay I really wish Elena would stop discarding things and not take them seriously, especially when it comes to someone like York or tratcher who are practically psychic! And I have a thought, but maybe Issac cut Phinns hair in an attempt at disguising himself. And as glad as I am about Olivier being safe and back, but is it not occurring to anyone that maybe Elizabeth or Smith jumped into her body? Maybe not cause winter would be able to sense her soul wouldn't he? And I'm sure wood would notice if jasper was suddenly himself and guessed where Elizabeth went, then he'd probably threaten to kill himself again. Hmm maybe this is just a good thing and Olivier is really back and I should just let it slide, but that's how they keep getting caught off guard. While Danver can be strict and tactless I'm glad that he takes everything with caution. Now I'm gonna obsessed over who could be keeping the keys, at first I thought maybe he hid it on Elena, she'd be the last person anyone would think to look, because she would be so obvious, ya know reverse psychology lol Oh yeah and I hope Elena and York become the best of friends, and now everytime I picture her she has magnificent eyebrows lol York is adorable, a child in a mans body.

Something's wrong with Olivier, I just know it. She's acting fishy and she was too persistent about the keys

I'm all kinds of confused and excited for the next update

Hmm, I don't think Elizabeth with Bind with Jasper, cause she is a girl in a guys body and in the last chapter we saw of him, she seemed really uncomfortable. But if she doesn't Bind with Jasper, she could easily escape to another person. I really hope they catch her before she has time to do anything.

And why would Hayden even tell her that, foreshadowing? I hope not!