Reviews for boneyard of pin-up dolls
smokahontas shut down chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
I just adore your style of writing. It evokes so many wonderful images inside my head.
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
This has some really beautiful images and metaphors in it. I love the train wreck sunset and the burnt juniper leaves and the acoustic guitar. Very vivid and creates an intense sense of awareness of the world, which I think is one of the highest goals poetry aims to achieve. There were a few cliches, like the first half of the second-last stanza, and the image of a flower with a strong scent could have been a bit more specific (such as saying the name of a flower, which would make this moment less wordy, too). But I really love this overall. Your style is beautiful and all your own.
My.Jesters.Tears chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
This was awesome! Very visual as well.
Loved it! xD