Reviews for Back Of My Wrist
Elizabeth Clayton chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
been there, done that. You aren't alone in that sort of pain, just so you know, or the agony and regret that follows- The poem was very well done and drew the reader in, the first line caught attention and made you want to see how the story unfolded, what would happen, how the narrator would cope. The middle kept in tune as well and the end summed the entire story, it was very well written, and very easy to read, the flow was good. The words were raw and the pain expressed made it real and tangible. I think you're very talented and hope you get through this trying time on your own two feet and smudged Ink.