|Reviews for When I Catch You|
| KayaxXX chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
This is a great poem! When I was a child, I thought exactly like what your poem said. Well done.
| Poet Lordy chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
A really good poem Yabu, honestly.
It stirred me enough to write this. OK, my style sometimes can be hard to unravel, but I sometimes like to write as a negative photo would reveal its self, not complete in its delivery but still heavily connected. Hope that made sense?.
I do like your poem though, well done. PL.
Caught by Words
Cold as ice, these eyes of steel
Head of hair, laird to appeal
Complexion taught, across the face
Dressing up, not to disgrace
Knowledge bought from journeyed life
Sown throughout and gelled as wife
Taking care of soul within
To bond with one, as life begins
Caught by Words, brought unto me
Laid in verse of ecstasy
Standing proud with watchful eyes
Poetic words rain down from skies
Through the window I see your face
Care to your soul, ne’re will I misplace
Held as flock brought down from heaven
Caught moments together clothed in leaven
Strong and kind my heart built so
Naught the need to ever let go
So caught by words this is so true
Your poem has ‘When I Catch You’
PoetLordy May 2013
| Who cares21 chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
I loved it! It's very..insightful! Do another;)!