|Reviews for The Unknown|
| Brievel chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Well this is interesting.
| snccrockz chapter 4 . 3/23/2014
its been a while since i've read your stories, and now your married lol i need to catch up. anyways, hope to see this updated when you have time. i like the plot.
| Katie chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Will you ever update "My Beloved"?
| Avra-Sha Faohla chapter 4 . 7/7/2013
I'm intrigued and looking forward to reading more! Please do keep writing. I'm really enjoying this.
| Samantha Cotton chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
Please, please, please keep writing! I am hooked!
| renegade01 chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Aww this was pretty emotional. I like how Jack is trying not to feel anything ;-)
| Arianna Flemming chapter 4 . 6/14/2013
Please more of this Wonderful story!
| funnechick chapter 4 . 6/13/2013
Wow...he took that better than I thought he would. But she's right, what is she going to tell her mother...and father? And I wondered if she was going to tell him about her brother. I'm glad he knows; hopefully that makes him understand her situation a little better.
No way is he going to be able to make it through this trip back home with her without beginning to like her, sober. :)
| Arianna Flemming chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Hello:) just wanted to say: loving this story of yours just stumbled upon it and loving Avery sec of it please more:) congrats on marriage:)
| renegade01 chapter 3 . 5/3/2013
she ran off! awesome ;) Jack's gonna be like of all the chicks to get stuck with... ;)
| Littlechin chapter 3 . 5/2/2013
First off I'm so excited that you're writing again! It was always such a pleasure to read your writing. So far i think this story is interesting, taking a lightly different spin off of the usual "we accidentally fell in bed together and got married". There is a lack of trying and panic on both ends. More of acceptance, but one is acceptance of change the other of wrong. I love how Adina has this internal conflict that you're exposing. Hope to see a update soon!
| renegade01 chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
hehe interesting beginning. its sad because of her brother's death but this chapter also made me grin so nice balance ;)
| Jainblu chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
I'm so glad to see you return to writing :)
I just wanted to point out what I reckon is a typo. It's in the sentence beginning "Yet, as she let my attention fade from him to the little diamond..." I think that 'my' should be a her. ;)
Anyway, welcome back !
| Kelly-Green chapter 2 . 4/22/2013
Wee! New story! I want to know about this stranger, who you haven't even given us a name for yet. I kinda wish we had the crazy drunken marriage to read but I think falling in love after they've fallen together will be a more interesting story. I'm looking forward to their personalities clashing. Adina sounds like she's going to be honest and mad and herself, family values and all which will be a fun foil for the stereotypical bad boy. Unless this is about her becoming more wild and letting go of her roots, in which case that's like five cliches too many P Post more soon please?
| Sugabubble chapter 2 . 4/22/2013
Thumps up on a great story!