|Reviews for Wind Whisperer|
| echogirlcapri chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Hi, I'm *finally* here to return your reviews. Long time no see.
Scary beginning. I was seriously scared to read on. It sounds like the beginning of a horror novel, but I don't see anything that says horror on here so ... I must be wrong.
[Blood crusted] should be hyphenated.
In the second paragraph you use the word "shaky" twice in very close proximity, which is probably not a very good idea.
["Finally" Katrina muttered, she almost winced ... ] Should be ["Finally," Katrina muttered. She almost winced ... ] right now you have a run on sentence with a mis-punctuation.
I'll try to read on later. Sorry for being so late.
| MyHeart's4Above chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
This is interesting indeed. Two characters merged into one? I am enthralled with the setting and characters as well as back story. I hope Andrea doesn't tell on Nate. Was what he was doing bad?
You write very well also. Nice flow, sentence structure and variety, and good backstory at the bottom.