Reviews for How Far is too Far?
KrysisKore chapter 10 . 3/24/2014
This story is pretty neat. However, a few plot holes. Some more background/flashbacks and this story will be amazing! ) keep up the good work!
Chris Miller chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
Hello there. I must say that I really like the idea of your story and the set up. My only critiques would be some grammar stuff and just to slow it down a bit. Like put some more detail into the office stuff or the opening scene. One thing that alway helps is to do some light research on poisons or something so that it makes more sense for the main character to recognize it. Also, you don't have to use a many specific nouns to determine what something is in the story. The repeated nouns give it some redundancy, and that kind I takes away from what I think you're trying to focus on getting across to the readers.