Reviews for Lies
ZeeZe101 chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
The rhymes are flawless.
There's a depth to this poem that's indescribable.
Did you mean to spell "secretes" that way?
Great job!
musicinmosaic chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
This is awesome. Very relatable and it's very well written. I love your word choices and the whole thing conveys a very compelling message. Well done.