Reviews for The collective
Acervate chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Not a bad first chapter, and ill admit the prologue helps me follow the story a lot. I like this story and i will be waiting for more. If you have any time on your hands perhaps you wouldn't mind reading my story. I am new here and this is my first story and i am looking for some constructive critsim and help. it would be much appreciated, and if you need any help or another perspective just let me know