Reviews for The Midnight Chase
Lia Jenson chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Demons chasing/dragging people to Hell is far from original or new and copyright, so if someone tries to sue you over it, you can laugh in their face. If you write a good story about a chair, does not mean anyone who's written about a chair can sue you over it. Look up copyright and its clauses.
Much too short, dear. You can make goodish descriptions. You can build suspense. But it's too short.
Oh well, let's see if this is just an exception to the norm.
Purplemonkey123 chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Could this one possibly have a double meaning? Like hell's demons could represent maybe events or situations? Or am I reading too much into it? It was really good though, i think you should take one of these and turn it into a complete story. Keep up the good work :)