|Reviews for The Heartless Maiden and the Faceless Knight|
| Guilty Bystanders chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
Glad your back. Sorry it took me so long to review.
| Guilty Bystanders chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
This is awesome.
| Guilty Bystanders chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Wow. This is amazing, even if the crone was hard to understand.
| Lord Monbodo chapter 2 . 4/27/2013
This chapter only builds on everything that was good in the first. I'd read this to learnt the lore of the setting, even if there wasn't an excellent fairy tale in the making.
My only real complaint is that these chapters are so short!
Here's to hoping you'll update again soon.
| Lord Monbodo chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Let me start by saying you had me hooked from the description.
I really enjoyed this world and your narrative style. You give just enough information to keep me wanting more, and I'm really excited to see where this goes.
There are a couple of grammatical errors at the beginning (you use too many "and"s in the "Her name was Fiore" paragraph) and you accidentally said king instead of baron at one point. "Despite the king's shouted command, there was a distinctive lack of guards in the corridor" But these don't really detract from the story.
I'm eager for more.