|Reviews for Winner|
| Dardiel chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Comment: I definitely want to know more, you very easily conveyed that Janice is an interesting character.
Suggestion: I think specifically naming the objects puts unneeded emphasis on them (not to mention the issues of mentioning copyrighted things, but it's public so you're fine in that aspect).
Assuming you have future writing prompts, I would very much enjoy to read a continuation of this story.