|Reviews for Shadow|
| dcflag chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Really liked reading this, I think theres room for exanding more on certain scenes just to fill it out a bit but on the whole it was really well written.
I understand why you wrote the ending as you did but I think maybe you could get rid of the last few sentences or perhaps change it so the thing in the closet is not referenced to the cat, just my opinion though :)
| Laura Tear chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Very well written! Love it - also hate it, but that has to do with me not doing at all well around creepy stories. this genre of stories gives me the Heebie Jeebies. Which yours managed to do very well if that makes you feel better :)
All in all, well written - didn't find any spelling mistakes, it kept me interested the whole way through and for me, it stuck with the horror theme very well.