awww i really hoped that elaina went with erik! :( but otherwise GREAT STORY!

I like the plot! Looking forward to an update!

Sorry i really hated this story...I WANTED HER TO END UP WITH ERIK! Blake is too blah...even Dmitri is better than him

I really really really like the Blake character and I thought erik would have ended up with charlotte... But greaaaatttt story...

Thank all mighty Jesus for the character development! I thought I'd never see the day! You really appreciate all the waiting now:)

Okay, now I need to go back and re-read the whole story... somehow I feel like I missed a chapter in the last part. Or perhaps it did end as abruptly as you suggest? I'm sure that a complete read-through in one sitting will fill in a lot of the holes in the story that I have right now.

Regardless, I enjoyed your story and your characters (except for the Grandmother) and hope to read more of your stories soon. Thanks for all of your hard work.

I really loved this story but to be honest I was expecting the ending way better than tis. It felt rushed. I don't know how I feel about it. Anyway, great story!

I expected her to be with Erik... But it was sweet that Elaina finally gets to be normal.

I love this story! Morrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeee!

So Erik is no linger the man for Elaina. *sigh*now it's Blake? I guess their a good match. He's childish and she's serious. Nice balance

No problems on the wait. It is good that she has friends who won't let her push them away. That is what she needs more than anything else.

Camille is hard to understand. She doesn't seem like the type who would try to help Elaina after just trying to kill her. Then again, this family is weird. What is that old saying: "Rich people aren't like the rest of us."

One typo. You typed "I say as I she shakes my hand." I think that there is one-too-many "I"'s

Wasn't she going to talke to her friends? Is she taking the coward's way out or is she going to talk to them at a different time? If she doesn't, then she is unworthy of the friendship that they offered her. Please, Ms. Writer, stop stringing this along and let the girl act human (even if just for a few minutes). The whole idea of her getting out from under her grandmother's shadow was to reclaim a life, not creep under a rock and pretend to be a potato-bug.

Ok my mind is made up,and am picking Erick coz i love his character a lot and i find him mature enough to handle Elaina without annoying the crap out of her,well at least not as much as Blake.
i find Blake a little too fake and in a rush,and therefore his intentions don't seem pure.

Hopefully she'll take Skylar's advice. She shouldn't leave all of that pain and misunderstanding behind... for her friends' sake if not for her own.