|Reviews for Canna Lilies|
| Social Anxiety Lives chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
I think the first line could use quotes. He is saying it after all. Do the drums have to beat? Find an image that is less cliché. Give me an image from your own mind. Second stanza is my favorite. It reads out loud very nicely. I like this poem a lot. However, I can't relate with the title. Perhaps try to switch it up a bit?