|Reviews for Copies And Freaks|
| Social Anxiety Lives chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Does the sea have to be "vast"? It is a cliché term. I like the line "and condemn without trial". Do you need a capital at the beginning of every line? I think you can get rid of them all, because you can no punctuation. It is also nice to see a poet try writing without the standards of grammar in mind. A great poem that I can certainly relate to.